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May 10, 2026 at 7:36 am #415323
Hi all,
Here is my response for the April 2026 challenge. I am currently doing a theology course, and we have been learning about Francis of Assisi… very inspiring… particularly his”Peace Prayer” which begins:
“Lord, Make me an instrument of your peace”…
So, I got this tune into my head.. if I could sing, the vocals for the first two lines would be: “Make me an instrument of your peace”… and where the melody changes… “Bless-ed are the peacemakers, bless-ed are the peacemakers…” … finishing with “Make me an instrument of your peace”…
I would like to develop this further…
Best wishes,
Rich F
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May 10, 2026 at 11:49 am #415335
That is definitely a start. I played around with your idea and it can be expressed in many ways. The sky’s the limit. You chose the perfect key to play it in too.
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May 10, 2026 at 12:32 pm #415340
That was awesome Rich. A very good hook.
Joe
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May 10, 2026 at 1:12 pm #415343
Nice melody, Rich. This can really grow to a song.
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May 10, 2026 at 2:15 pm #415356
Very nice.
Great melody.
Keep adding to it, you could create a beautiful peace.
Love that quote “Lord, Make me an instrument of your peace”AndréM
AndréM
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May 11, 2026 at 5:05 am #415528
It has all the makings of a much larger piece, some really strong ideas condensed into this clip
Really well done
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May 11, 2026 at 12:30 pm #415585
Very catchy, you should totally run with that idea!
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May 11, 2026 at 1:33 pm #415603
This is nice Rich, definitely the seed/hook of something special. It’s got a Reggae vibe to my ear.
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May 11, 2026 at 2:19 pm #415613
Your hook was perfect, Rich. Great ideas!
🎸JoLa
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May 12, 2026 at 7:07 am #415649
Rich
Great stuff. I know this from church. Good work, peaceful, steady and an enjoyable listen.John
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May 13, 2026 at 1:36 pm #415745
Rich, ,nice way to expose the life of St. Francis of Assisi. Such a humble man and the prayer is what our world needs right now. Nice job…finish it. Cheers. Pap
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