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April 29, 2023 at 6:57 am #341440
I wrote this song a little while back. A family friend found this poem among her late mother belonging. As I was listening to her sharing / reading this poem, I felt that I could “hear” an outline of a song. I asked her for a copy and worked on it and came up with this song. I found a lot of encouragement from these words and I hope you do to. The full lyrics is at the Youtube site.
And as per the challenge’s request, practically no one has ever heard thing song before 🙂 (I finish recording this just yesterday!)
Thank you for listening. I loop forward to hear all of your submissions.
“Tomorrow is yet to come, and yesterday’s a dream
wipe away all your tears, you’ll live however it seems
Remember that you’re not alone, whatever you are going through.
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April 29, 2023 at 7:21 am #341443
Very nicely composed piece Reuben. You are a very good multi-instrumentalist, and all the parts fit together so well and added to the overall feel of the song. You must have spent a lot of time producing this song, and your efforts were very worthwhile. Very beautiful lyrics, along with beautiful playing. Your friends Mother would be very proud that her words are living on through your music.
Very well done Reuben,
RalphRalph P.
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April 29, 2023 at 7:39 am #341446
A very beautiful song and tribute Reuben! Wow! You’re one talented musician: multi instrumentalist, vocalist, song writer, composer, arranger and video production … Like Ralph mentioned above, so much time and effort into this. You should be very proud and we are honoured that you are sharing your talents and original song with us. Very enjoyable. Keep on pickin’ and all the best! 🥸🎸🥸
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April 29, 2023 at 8:10 am #341458
That was really awesome Reuben
What a multi-musical-talent you are🎶
I enjoyed the Total performance
Thank you so much for sharing
Looking forward to your future challenges
🎸 Vincent 🎶 🇳🇱
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April 29, 2023 at 8:38 am #341470
Multi talented is certainly the phrase that comes to mind as I watch and listen to this. I appreciate that a lot of effort has gone into this and I applaud you for seeing it through to such a successful conclusion.
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April 29, 2023 at 8:47 am #341471
Way to go Reuben! Nice work puting all the parts together and recording video! I especially like the acoustic and tele leads!
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April 29, 2023 at 10:57 am #341532
Wow Reuben!!! You and Prince – playing all the instruments for your amazing comp here! Very touching story and love the song. This is your best so far! Keep writing – you’ve got a gift! B
Bob U. (aka Bobby Ut)
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April 29, 2023 at 11:38 am #341558
What a production, Reuben. Terrific composition and all your own work – amazing. I’m filled with admiration.
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April 29, 2023 at 11:47 am #341567
Well that is quite a production. Well done and nice composition.
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April 29, 2023 at 11:54 am #341571
So good, Reuben. What a project, what a great performance playing all the instruments. A lovely poem that you’ve turned into a lovely song. Bravo 👏👏👏
James
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April 29, 2023 at 1:30 pm #341625
Awesome Ruben you are a talented multi-intrumentalist.
Very nice song.
Great mix.AndréM
AndréM
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April 29, 2023 at 2:57 pm #341661
Okay, I need to sort first. Or I ask which instrument you can’t play. It doesn’t matter, you’re already a musical all-rounder and then you sing with a cool voice. Really impressively good. Chapeau.
Play guitar just like you live; don't get bogged down in theory, it's just a tool without feeling.
Wilfried
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April 29, 2023 at 3:43 pm #341683
Wow, Reuben, i‘m amazed, you play all this instruments and sing. What a fantastic work and production. And what a wonderful song, what is powerful and moving. Great work!
Take the chance to meet your AM friends on Zoom
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April 29, 2023 at 4:43 pm #341717
This is glorious Reuben. Wonderfully written, produced, and performed.
John
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April 29, 2023 at 5:15 pm #341746
Reuben,
Fantastic. You have so much talent. great composition.
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April 29, 2023 at 7:13 pm #341784
I loved it – your best ever post! What a great way to come up for an idea for a song! Your chords and melody fit perfectly with the lyrics. I suspect your friend was really impressed also. Nice arrangement, well recorded. And I’m seeing more and more AM members who are multi-instrumentalists, which I think is awesome.
Sunjamr Steve
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April 29, 2023 at 8:42 pm #341818
Wow, Reuben I am amazed about your talent!!!! Great music arrangement. That must have been a huge work to do. Wonderful song. I love all these guitar parts. And bravo for playing piano and drums.
Great vocals…great song and lyrics. I am gonna listen again.
Bravo, Reuben.
DeniseMore Blues!
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April 29, 2023 at 8:52 pm #341825
Reuben, this is really good. Nice chord progression, arrangement and a positive message. Thanks for sharing.
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April 30, 2023 at 3:09 am #341874
Wow ! You certainly are a multi instrumentalist, your efforts have rewarded you , finely crafted in all parts .
Gotta be your best to date and one to be proud of .
Really enjoyed it .Martin
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April 30, 2023 at 5:59 am #341921
Hi Reuben!
You brought a lot of talent to this months challenge! Vocals, drums, piano and guitar all came together for a great performance!
Bravo 👏🎶🎵Don P
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April 30, 2023 at 8:39 am #341986
Thanks for sharing such a nice story and song Reuben! The video is amazing, this is really a pro level, congrats!
If I wasn't making mistakes I wouldn't be the kind of player I want to be. Perfection is dangerous.
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April 30, 2023 at 3:38 pm #342138
Great work to bring this poem to life Rueben. Your song is a pleasure to hear. And your instrumental parts are amazing and work so well together. Very well envisioned, played, and recorded. 🙏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Cheers, Tom
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April 30, 2023 at 5:22 pm #342192
Impressive work Rueben, you are multi-talented. The production was the real deal and could easily be snapped up by a talent scout for the main stream. And to know the touching story behind it, the butterfly effect of those written words that has already been shared thus far, further than she would ever know.
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April 30, 2023 at 9:24 pm #342256
This was great. What programs did you use to record all the different tracks? Keep them coming. This is really good. also some nice solo’s there & great drumming (good feel)!
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May 2, 2023 at 1:13 pm #342606
Hi Andre, I used Zoom H4N Pro to record the tracks. I basically started with just a guitar and vocal with its built-in mics as the rough “base”, then added drum, bass, piano. Then I re-recorded the guitar rhythm and vocal (replacing the first take), before adding the acoustic and electric lead. I then dumped the tracks to Audacity on the computer and adjusted the levels there.
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May 1, 2023 at 12:31 am #342295
Wow, you’re a man of many talents, Reuben! Of the guitar and vocal skills I was already aware but also piano and drums?? Dang, I’m starting to feel like a total misfit! Beautiful song and arrangement, I can’t imagine the work that went into this epic. And what a lovely way to commemorate someone’s late Mom’s lyrics by turning them into a song, you should be proud. I love the piano part at the beginning!
🎸JoLa
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May 1, 2023 at 7:16 am #342370
Reuben,
That was beautifully done on every level.
Kudos to you for bringing that poem to life.“Laissez les bon temps rouler“
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May 1, 2023 at 11:42 am #342418
Wow! Really fabulous Reuben!! I had no idea you played so many instruments, and you’ve put them all together really well here with a wonderful original song. Your music perfectly supports the lyric and the whole production offers an uplifting feeling and message of well-being. Just so well done!
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May 1, 2023 at 5:39 pm #342506
Fantastic, Reuben! Jeez, drums and piano too? So cool. You really did justice to that poem, turning it into a beautiful, uplifting song. And great job on the production. I suspect this is not the last effort of this sort we’ll see from you!
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May 2, 2023 at 1:09 pm #342605
Thank you for the very generous and supportive comment. This was a labor of love basically, but I had a lot of fun putting it all together 🙂
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May 3, 2023 at 6:04 am #342660
wow what a great contribution so many skills on show hard to pick one out.
Your balance and recording was pretty spot on the whole thing felt very much like a unified song
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May 3, 2023 at 11:26 pm #342713
Reuben, I knew this was going to be good because all of your submissions impress me. However, this blew me away! You are so talented and focused. You turned this poem into something really special and uplifting. Your family friend’s mother would have wrote more if she knew you were going to put a production together like this one. Well done man! Cheers. Pap
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May 4, 2023 at 11:11 am #342755
what talent! the melody settles in immediately and very quickly you want to hum it. And also what an arrangement, it’s really a very well constructed and arranged song with a melancholic melody that goes perfectly with the lyrics. And what a talented multi-instrumentalist!
you should post it on social network,it deserves to be known!Valérie Martin
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